My daughter doesn’t like my Haiku. She says it has too much description and needs to be simpler.But I like it fine.

The tree is perfect
The field is green and ragged
The sun sets slowly


The dog runs and runs
The brook flows around the bend
The sun shines brightly


The famous-most-best haiku is not 5 – 7 – 5.
It is 2 – 4 – 2.

old pond…
a frog leaps in
water’s sound


round tree
a field of weeds
sun sets


young dog
the water flows
sun shines


 Ezra Pound made


             into pictures



                                                                  pages of his books.

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